The blog is a record of my learning from Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ through to Tamaki College.
Wow Toma I really love the way how you have written lots of similis,adjective,and metaphor keep it up!Maybe next time you could change your metaphor by that I mean take the like off because metaphors doesn't have any like or as in it.
Hey Toma, I really loved the way you used good similes,adjectives,metaphors and verbs.Maybe next time you should change your metaphor because in metaphors you dont have as in a metaphor
Hey Toma,I really like the way you used lot's of similes adjectives and verbs.Keep it up.
WOW Tomai like the way you really write you poem.I like the way you put similes and adjectives and verbs.Maybe next time you sould change your metaphor
Hey Toma I like the way you use adjectives and similes in your sun poetry using the work from the other dayPEACE BRO!
Hi Toma i like the way you done a amazing poem about the sun.Maybe next time you should delete the other things that are not included.
Wow Toma I really love the way how you have written lots of similis,adjective,and metaphor keep it up!
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time you could change your metaphor by that I mean take the like off because metaphors doesn't have any like or as in it.
Hey Toma, I really loved the way you used good similes,adjectives,metaphors and verbs.
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time you should change your metaphor because in metaphors you dont have as in a metaphor
Hey Toma,
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you used lot's of similes adjectives and verbs.
Keep it up.
WOW Toma
ReplyDeletei like the way you really write you poem.I like the way you put similes and adjectives and verbs.Maybe next time you sould change your metaphor
Hey Toma
ReplyDeleteI like the way you use adjectives and similes in your sun poetry using the work from the other day
PEACE BRO!
Hi Toma i like the way you done a amazing poem about the sun.Maybe next time you should delete the other things that are not included.
ReplyDelete