Freestyle Writing About An Image

WALT: Freestyle writing about an image.

Today our teacher asked us to write a story about a picture. This is what I wrote. Tell me what you think in the comments below.

The wind rushed through her hair as she descended the mountain at great speed for most children this would be an exhilarating, even terrifying experience, but for lucy it was just an ordinary journey to school.

Lucy’s house was in the jungle on top of a mountain.

Going to her school it was like it was full of animals. They acted like pigs, donkeys, monkeys, horse, and Apes. Lucy was the most craziest donkey person in the whole school, she went to people and whisper in their ear going HEEHOOO, she would go on her knees and crawl around making HEEEHHOOO noises.

It was very different to what my school was like because people from my school wouldn’t sit like animals and do animal sounds. My school was very normal. People would walk normal, talk normal, and sit normal.

While Lucy was going down the zipline she felt butterflies in her stomach. She felt like someone was going to cut the rope cause there were people cutting down trees.

When she almost got to the finish point she dropped her money and screamed “NOOOOOOOOO! my money, I was going to use that to go and buy me fish and chips after school”.

Then when she got to school she told her friends she lost her money while going down the zipline. Then her friends asked her “How come you come to school like this?” Then Lucy said “It’s because of my house, it’s on the top of the other mountain”.

Then after all of that her friends felt sorry for her and went with Lucy and brought her fish and chips. The end